That is the title of the current manuscript I'm writing. I know it's premature to have a title before the story's done, but its helped focus my words as I pound through the plot and stay true to the essence of what it all means.
When the Moon Fell is also the title of the piece I just choreographed for CSUS' next performance. I am a guest choreographer and opening night is Wednesday. I couldn't be more excited for my dancers who are some of the most talented dancers I've ever choreographed on. It's a solo and the two dancers will be switching off nights.
Alyssa and Gem are the moon falling from the sky, barely hanging on to the night that keeps them there.
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| image via Free People Blog |
I was interviewed by the newspaper to talk about my piece. Standing in front of the man's digital recorder, I basically rambled on about nothing, completely embarrassing myself in print. (This is why I'm a writer, people!)
Luckily, I was given a second chance when the choreographers were asked to write a quick explanation of their pieces to be displayed in the stage lobby . Here's what I came up with.
The moon.
Smooth. Bright. Glossy.
Hanging like a pearl in the sky.
Few know her cracks; less have touched them.
They are there, although she hides them well.
They are obscured by her light, her undeniable presence.
Quiet in the morning, undeniable at night, she and her scars
are always there.
How do you hide your scars?
If you're interested in seeing the show, let me know.
Performances run from Wednesday night to Sunday matinee in Solano 1010 at CSUS.

19 comments:
I love the title. It's so beautiful.
And I so wish I could come see you dance!
What a beautiful title.
it sounds gorgeous! wish i could see it, friend. :)
I wish I was closer! The title is quite beautiful, very enchanting & mysterious.
Beautiful title. You definitely have a way with words!
Isn’t That Charming.
I wish I could see it. It sounds wonderful!
A beautiful title and inspiring with that image.
I love what you wrote. Beautiful. And that image is stunningly gorgeous. Also I hate being recorded...I always get so anxious. Haha.
aw i so wish i could see the show!! can someone you tube it up in here?!
and also, the words are beautiful.
Not premature at all, sounds wonderful! xxx
Oh, this sounds so beautiful, Tiffany! :)
This sounds absolutely stunning-congratulations, darling!
*love it babes* - i sure do hide my scars - not going into detail but i have many - but i hide the best i can :o)
ps i have a giveaway going on :o)
Such a beautiful evocative title. I'm sure it's going to be an amazing show.
That is a really beautiful title!
& I can definitely relate to expressing myself better in writing. Being able to backspace is a wonderful thing.
I wish I could see it... I love that title!
What a beautiful title! (and isn't it awful to have to speak in public?!?) I bet it's going to be a beautiful piece. Best of luck!
Personally, I quite like my scars... They show a life lived.
Wow, that is really beautiful! What a poetic name for your manuscript, I love it.
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